As darkness fell a ring of clouds formed roughly one hundred meters off shore. Trying to sleep was fruitless, we didn't have much shelter either so we were quite exposed to the weather. The rough ground was also a contributing factor to why I didn't sleep well, to make matters worse there was absolutely no light not even the stars were out that night.
Okay - a nice, brief descriptive addition to your tale... Now re-read it closely to find the place where a comma is missing, where you used a comma when it should be a full stop and where you used an American spelling.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the regular entries - well done!
I love your image [despite it not being accurate to your description.]
:-)
Awesome!!!!!
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